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[Young]

I wrote this for my group.
I think it?s cute!

What yawl think ?

And be honest ?

The Song is Called Eternal Love. And that is whatever you believe that to be. Whether about a person, God, yourself etc...

Lemme know!! Lolz


https://vocaroo.com/i/s04r8c08bf3O

[KING BENTLEY.]

Oh .... I love this baby!

Are yawl doing a harmony call and response on that post-chorus? .... the ?Love .... Love .... Love? part
it?d be cute to switch that up, like come in on the second beat of the verse and even take it higher, then have your group slay a bit

This is a really cute dark dramatic tease!

[Young]

Oh .... I love this baby!

Are yawl doing a harmony call and response on that post-chorus? .... the ?Love .... Love .... Love? part
it?d be cute to switch that up, like come in on the second beat of the verse and even take it higher, then have your group slay a bit

This is a really cute dark dramatic tease!

Oh yes!!!

I have visions !

And believe me my Ghandy has kicked in because I need a full choir on the chorus , overlapping reverbs , the whole damns NINE!

Thank you my love !!!

I value your opinion sooo fckn much

[Young]

And this is just me singing so of course there?s more tones and vocal styles on the real thing once we record .

We?re just trying to find a first single .

I?m just thinking this could be it

[rosone1]

The writing is good and I like the production but I feel like they don't match.The song is about eternal love but the beat is dark and dramatic.Props.

[Young]

The writing is good and I like the production but I feel like they don't match.The song is about eternal love but the beat is dark and dramatic.Props.

Hmmmmm yeah I was going for that kinda vibe. Finding the light even in the darkness . The full recording would really color it pretty !

And Thanks!

[KING BENTLEY.]

The writing is good and I like the production but I feel like they don't match.The song is about eternal love but the beat is dark and dramatic.Props.

oh yea, I love mess like this

It?s kinda like Lana, sis will be talking about the love of her life over a trap funeral beat.

When they stack those harmonies for FILTH it should give ethereal tea imo.

[Scott.]

I'm gonna listen to because you always read my stuff

[rosone1]

The writing is good and I like the production but I feel like they don't match.The song is about eternal love but the beat is dark and dramatic.Props.

Hmmmmm yeah I was going for that kinda vibe. Finding the light even in the darkness . The full recording would really color it pretty !

And Thanks!

Oh I see.Can't wait to hear it.

[ya rock muh world.]

you are such a monica stan sdsdnsn

i like where ur going with it bvy.... 

the chorus is nice - the arrangement on the verses just need to be tamed a bit . they ran away from the track in some spots. give the verses that same smooth approach that you gave the chorus. thats perfect timing you had there with the chorus - and the flow was nice. caress your verses with the same approach and you'll be goodie!

love the emotion u had as well. u know i love a good EMOTE owt. 

[Young]

you are such a monica stan sdsdnsn

i like where ur going with it bvy.... 

the chorus is nice - the arrangement on the verses just need to be tamed a bit . they ran away from the track in some spots. give the verses that same smooth approach that you gave the chorus. thats perfect timing you had there with the chorus - and the flow was nice. caress your verses with the same approach and you'll be goodie!

love the emotion u had as well. u know i love a good EMOTE owt. 

Ack!!!!!

Thank you King 

Okay this is good advice. I think it?ll be easier for me to switch tones and approaches too once I record in the studio and give more than just one straight take .

I like that idea. Thank you sis!

[ya rock muh world.]

you are such a monica stan sdsdnsn

i like where ur going with it bvy.... 

the chorus is nice - the arrangement on the verses just need to be tamed a bit . they ran away from the track in some spots. give the verses that same smooth approach that you gave the chorus. thats perfect timing you had there with the chorus - and the flow was nice. caress your verses with the same approach and you'll be goodie!

love the emotion u had as well. u know i love a good EMOTE owt. 

Ack!!!!!

Thank you King 

Okay this is good advice. I think it?ll be easier for me to switch tones and approaches too once I record in the studio and give more than just one straight take .

I like that idea. Thank you sis!

Yeah I think when you have to do something like that in one take it runs the risk of a vocal sounding "rushed". It can be nerve wrecking knowing that you have to demo your song in one take lol so i think that also could have contributed to what i heard in the flow of the verses . but you really relaxed once you hit the chorus. lol.

i love the chorus - and thats the most important part of the song so kudos bvy!  finesse those verses and it'll be ca-yute!!!!

[Young]

you are such a monica stan sdsdnsn

i like where ur going with it bvy.... 

the chorus is nice - the arrangement on the verses just need to be tamed a bit . they ran away from the track in some spots. give the verses that same smooth approach that you gave the chorus. thats perfect timing you had there with the chorus - and the flow was nice. caress your verses with the same approach and you'll be goodie!

love the emotion u had as well. u know i love a good EMOTE owt. 

Ack!!!!!

Thank you King 

Okay this is good advice. I think it?ll be easier for me to switch tones and approaches too once I record in the studio and give more than just one straight take .

I like that idea. Thank you sis!

Yeah I think when you have to do something like that in one take it runs the risk of a vocal sounding "rushed". It can be nerve wrecking knowing that you have to demo your song in one take lol so i think that also could have contributed to what i heard in the flow of the verses . but you really relaxed once you hit the chorus. lol.

i love the chorus - and thats the most important part of the song so kudos bvy!  finesse those verses and it'll be ca-yute!!!!

Awww I love you guys and thank you for your honesty




I?m taking notes !

[ya rock muh world.]

 

[Scott.]

Dorian, I love this song.