Dawn Richard on writing for & falling out w/ Brandy, accusations by Aubrey

Started by SouravMay, July 29, 2016, 04:29:09 AM

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Vonc2002

Quote from: GoDiegoGo on July 29, 2016, 03:52:10 PM
LONG POST ALERT

A few notes, from one journalist to another:

Environment:
The setting wasn't bad. I'd go for a place with less ambient noise or consider different mic options. Also, the eyes wander in locations like this. I'd be careful with competing visuals during such a lengthy interview.

Presence:
It's great to see you on film. You have a good look for video. Try not to move so much in view of the camera. It's a bit distracting. Also, your positioning with Dawn was a bit awkward. I'd do more thoughtful space planning so you're not constantly turning towards or away from the camera.

Relation With Subject:
You did a phenomenal job using your own anecdotes to make Dawn feel more comfortable and ground the interview. I also helped transition from question to question. That was great!

Length:
A near 40-minute video is almost indigestible. Cutting it up will serve you well, especially if you want other news outlets to pick it up. For example, the bit about her sexual proclivities could easily be fed to Madam Noire, Essence, etc. And they would run it. But, only if there is a segment of that highlight. You can do that with a lot of different parts of the interview and that's a sign of a strong Q&A.

Transitions:
Most journalists have trouble transitioning from question to question and you didn't. Your pace is great and you flowed really well throughout. You can see that Dawn was comfortable and appreciative that you did your homework. It made it nice to watch.

Overall, I enjoyed the interview. You have great energy, a confident presence and with some polishing you can really make an impact.

Sorry if I come across like a professor. I taught journalism and interviewing techniques at NYU before I left New York. Anywho, really great job. Look forward to seeing more of your work bruv.
Come thru 'ego
This is my pass to say WHATEVER tf I wanna say about the mess she releases so I don't wanna hear SHIT! Baby mama is a mess of a song btw





RAY7

Quote from: Vonc2002 on July 29, 2016, 04:44:34 PM
Quote from: Yar backwards on July 29, 2016, 03:39:17 PM
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Quote from: Vonc2002 on July 29, 2016, 03:13:33 PM
But she said she's working WITH MBK she just said they don't manage her :dead:
We don't know the specifics of their dealings with each other. Like the stuff y'all say she "lies" about is just :dead:
&

The situation was confusing
exactly
she works with a management firm but they dont manage her? :uhh:
So because that's one thing that they do, they can't do anything else? Smh
I went to their official website and pasted a quote of what they do
I mean :uhh: she's listed on their Roster and everything

Vonc2002

So it shows that she works with them? Ok cool. Now does it say exactly what their business relationship is?
This is my pass to say WHATEVER tf I wanna say about the mess she releases so I don't wanna hear SHIT! Baby mama is a mess of a song btw





RAY7

Yes it says she's on their ROSTER
usually that means you're signed with a company but I guess not

SouravMay

B7

RAY7

Right that's the other thing I initially said, like she clearly stated they are a label that's why I posted that quote
the girl clearly just be rambling on just lying to hear herself talk

Vonc2002

This is my pass to say WHATEVER tf I wanna say about the mess she releases so I don't wanna hear SHIT! Baby mama is a mess of a song btw






Opposites Attract.



It's unconditional, these days you know....


SouravMay

B7

Opposites Attract.

T4p!

My only wish is that she opens up more. She seems in authentic sometimes but this was great.


It's unconditional, these days you know....

Wtv

watching it, Malcom.
Ive always found you funny, in a cute way  :-D

Vonc2002

This is my pass to say WHATEVER tf I wanna say about the mess she releases so I don't wanna hear SHIT! Baby mama is a mess of a song btw